You should finish it before submitting. It has off and on pacing. Smooth that out and finish it and it should rock.
You should finish it before submitting. It has off and on pacing. Smooth that out and finish it and it should rock.
yeah, it should rly rock XD thanks
The Feel
The overall aura of this animation was captivating. Your style of art is quite intense, although it may just be my cup of tea as this submission is ranking a staggeringly low 3.5 right now. I really really hope you still get some recognition for this though, because it deserves it.
I wish you the best. From one helplessly depressed mind to another.
Thanks, Haha.
Judgemental?
You submitted this piece to NG to be judged, so you shouldn't ask people to not be judgmental. That's what they're here to do. You should just say "keep in mind this was my frist flash" or something.
Anywho, you've got good ideas for angles and sequencing, but the artwork needs to improve. You'll get there, you've got the hardest parts figured out already, stuff that some artists never achieve. Just keep at it and you'll do great things.
Thanks for the positive feedback I actually thought that no one would even bother commenting. I really appreciate your thoughts.
You get an A for effort
You put a LOT into this, but I know once you get more experience, the quality will go up. Animation isn't bad, but shading and just overall drawing needs a little help. You've got good voice actors, but the recording quality is shabby and cut poorly.
You'll get better, a lot better if you stick to it. But this isn't bad.
Wow...
Phat, son... Very phat.
Love the animation style.
Keep rockin' it.
Nice mustache?
Weird how the mustache moved out of sequence with the lip syncing... But beyond that, just not a whole lot to say I like about the animation. Maybe next time :)
Hmmmm...
Perhaps in the right frame of mind, at the right time, this might have had a little more impact. I thought it was mostly funny though... Which I don't think you were going for.
Sure
Quirky, but got some style to it. I'll 8 4 this piece.
Thanks for the entertainment.
Nice pimpwalk.
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